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It's hard to criticise this, you are working with your limitations and i think that's great.

I felt unconformable when I was supposed to feel unconformable without feeling groused out. It was easy to understand and didn't dive to deep. when making psychological films they can sometimes feel pretentious but I didn't feel that at all.

the only think i can think of is when she lets out her dad from the jail cell. it would have been nice to se the girl open the door and him leaving the cell, but other than that I think this was great.

I'm guessing your inspired by don't hug me I'm scared.

StephenHutchins responds:

Leme guess, you think it's about vegetarianism lol.

And yeah don't hug me I'm scared is the shit

The tweening in the the first scene, the establishing shot, was way to hard and didn't really need to be tweened in the first place, try using more subtle movments.

You could work a little on the comedic timing, i think we saw her naked for to long, it seemed strange to me that she covererd herself after that they've died and not sooner.

the short pause between them dying and the pentakill might not att first seem that of a big deal, but it kills the flow, we all know the "pentakill" voice is coming, so don't wait for it just do it.

the forest backgrounds wear really great, the animation was pretty neat, i liked the dragon ball sound effect. Tell me if I'm wrong but it felt very naruto inspired, i jot got that vibe.

but you know that's just my opinion dude, love to hear from you

teemovsall responds:

Thanks for your constructive feedback!

Creepy but clever. I like the animation, and the robot was very cleverly put together, lowering the framerate was a smart move, it helped to make the animation feel more organic. When animation with symbols it's hard to make it fit in with the rest of the animation, but I think you pulled it of very well.

SilentChimaru responds:

Thank's! :D

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