It's hard to criticise this, you are working with your limitations and i think that's great.
I felt unconformable when I was supposed to feel unconformable without feeling groused out. It was easy to understand and didn't dive to deep. when making psychological films they can sometimes feel pretentious but I didn't feel that at all.
the only think i can think of is when she lets out her dad from the jail cell. it would have been nice to se the girl open the door and him leaving the cell, but other than that I think this was great.
I'm guessing your inspired by don't hug me I'm scared.